NDM baseline assessment learner response

WWW: This starts so well with excellent focus on the question and a relevant ,recent example of the refugee crisis.

EBI: However, you really lose your way midway through the essay.Focus on the question slip and some points are very  weak.stalking at Westfield?not sure its relevant

you really need to develop the other side of the argument ...the ideas audiences are not empowered and in fact institution , retain the power.


Write a well-developed paragraph exploring this other side of the argument

LR
Also developments on the new did digital media means everything is more accessibility as i was talking abut before and so its so easy to view content that is inappropriate for the younger generation.nothing is censored from YouTube videos ,Google images etc.So if anyone under the age of 18 sees these things them or their parents will be horrified.This can influence a child perception of things such as how they even treat women as they see them being perceived in that way.
Also the internet also has many pop ups various other sites and so they may contain adult content with half naked women on them.Also the main thing is Porn where its easy to access and easy to view as it takes you to type it in on any search engine you want.Also there's other non censored things such as brutal killing especially from sites that show Islamic terrorist group Isis killing innocent people heads off with knifes and shoot their heads off.An example of that was the story of the former presenter who killed his won colleagues and posted it on his twitter as he videos himself killing them.This is the age we living as there is self journalism as everyone has a phone or keypad and so they can post pictures videos and blogs instant to the new digital media for everyone to see showing there point.The internet is a great can be a very dark place too as you find things that are hard to see in real life with your own eyes.By the audience being journalist they retained power as they can comment on things too.So this means wherever you go you see the audience point of view on the situation.