www: Much better coverage of key areas:decline in newspapers industry etc.
ebi: Almost no focus on the question the word trust appears three times in the essay and not in the intro.
Still lacking examples and theories.
2) Read through the mark scheme. Of the six different statements, write which you think is currently your strongest and which is weakest. Explain WHY and, for the weakest, what you are going to do to improve in that area.
Strongest: Well structured, articulate and engaged.My essay was structured well with various paragraphs leading up to the conclusion with different examples and theories.
Weakness: A sharp focus on the question throughout,this is my weakness because i go off the topic and don't relate that theories example to the question properly.
3) Read through the exemplar A grade essay. What does this essay offer that yours does not? Identify THREE things you can take from this essay to improve your own responses in future.
- Statics
- Good arguments
- Good points
4) Write ONE new paragraph for your January assessment essay. Ideally, this should be a section you did not cover in your original essay. This paragraph needs to be comprehensive and meet the criteria for Level 4 of the mark scheme.
With new and digital media developing audiences are given a wide range of opinions and examples as well as generating their own content, leading the society to be more democratic.However, the new and digital media confuses the audiences on to who's content to believe as their are so many different things happened and said.
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